Merge pull request #11 from traffic-lane/patch-1

grammatical fixes

README.md

@@ -9,27 +9,28 @@
 ***Disclaimer: I am not held responsible for any damage done to your device.***<br/>
 ***Note: you must have a computer to launch the script via SSH, you cannot use NewTerm.***<br/>
 ***Note: I recommend that you know what you're doing***<br/>
-1) You don't need to restore rootfs anymore Tweaks/Apps Are saved<br/>
+1) You don't need to restore rootfs anymore, Tweaks/Apps are saved<br/>
 2) Refresh sources in Cydia and install `OpenSSH` and `Curl`<br/>
 3) Find the IP of your iDevice and connect to it via SSH on your computer. Don't know what SSH is or how to use it? Refer to: https://www.hostinger.com/tutorials/ssh-tutorial-how-does-ssh-work<br/>
 4) Use the following command in your SSH session for installation:<br/>
 `/bin/bash -c "$(curl -fsSL https://raw.githubusercontent.com/Yaya48/Uncursus/new/installuncursus.sh)"`<br/>
 5) Once your device resprings, launch Sileo and you're good to go.<br/>
 
-***For All Users Cannot Have A Pc I Made a Non-Computer Version***<br/>
+***For all users that don't have a PC, I made a Non-Computer version.***<br/>
-***Note: Disclimer This still in beta***<br/>
+***Disclaimer: This is still in beta***<br/>
-1) You don't need to restore rootfs anymore Tweaks/Apps Are saved
+1) You don't need to restore rootfs anymore, Tweaks/Apps are saved
 2) Add https://repo.yaya48.gq in cydia
-3) Install Uncursus Installer
+3) Install `Uncursus Installer` as well as `NewTerm (iOS 10-13)` if you don't have it already
-4) Enter In Terminal And Log In As Root With Default Passworld Type: su after alpine
+4) Open NewTerm and login as root with your password. Type `su`, then `alpine` (or your root password)
-5) Run uncursus-installer and wait
+5) Type `uncursus-installer`, then run it and wait
-6) When Is Finished Your Device Will Respring After Open Sileo Do Update And Enjoy
+6) When finished, your device will respring.
+7) Open Sileo, update your packages and enjoy
 
 ### Questions & Support:
 - Discord: Yaya4#1989
 - Twitter: [@Yaya4_4](https://twitter.com/Yaya4_4)
 
-***Note: The support is not made for install help but for bug reports or ask questions all install steps is here***<br/>
+***Note: Support is not for installation help, but for bug reports or asking questions. All installation steps are here***<br/>
 
 ### Credits:
 [Procursus Team](https://github.com/ProcursusTeam/) - for the bootstrap<br/>

installuncursus.sh

@@ -9,28 +9,28 @@ command -v curl >/dev/null 2>&1 || need+="curl "
 command -v wget >/dev/null 2>&1 || need+="wget "
 clear
 echo -e "\e[31mWelcome to Uncursus Installation Script V2.0.2 (Stable) By @Yaya4_4 on Twitter.\e[0m"
-echo "Checking if This Script Is Run On ARM Darwin"
+echo "Checking if this script is running on ARM Darwin"
 if [ $(uname) = "Linux" ]; then
 	if [ $(uname -p) = "x86_64" ]; then
 		PC=yes
      fi
 fi
 if [[ "${PC}" = yes ]]; then
-echo "Use This On SSH Over IP Session Thanks On Your Idevice"
+echo "Use this script with SSH over an IP session on your iDevice. Thanks."
 exit  1
      else
-    echo "ARM Darwin Dectected Running ..."
+    echo "ARM Darwin detected, running..."
-echo "Checking If Is A Clean Install Of Unc0ver..."
+echo "Checking if you're using a clean install of unc0ver..."
 if [[ -f "/.installed_unc0ver" ]]; then
               u0=yes
                   else
                      u0=no
                    fi
 if [[ "${u0}" = no ]]; then
-echo "Use Unc0ver Thanks"
+echo "Use unc0ver, thanks"
 exit  1
 else 
-echo "Unc0ver Dectected"
+echo "unc0ver detected"
 echo "WARNING: I'M NOT RESPONSIBLE IF ANYTHING GOES WRONG"
 echo "If you've found any bugs, please create an issue in GitHub."
 echo "Checking Dependencies..."

procursus-migration.sh

@@ -7,18 +7,18 @@ echo -e "\e[31mUncursus 2.0 Migration Part By Yaya4_4 1.0 (Sbtale)\e[0m"
 echo "Checking iOS Version"
 VER=$(/usr/bin/plutil -key ProductVersion /System/Library/CoreServices/SystemVersion.plist)
 if [[ "${VER%.*}" -ge 12 ]] && [[ "${VER%.*}" -lt 13 ]]; then
-echo "iOS 12 Dectected Set The CFVER To 1500"
+echo "iOS 12 detected, setting the CFVER to 1500"
 CFVER=1500
 elif [[ "${VER%.*}" -ge 13 ]]; then
-echo "iOS 13 Dectected Set The CFVER To 1600"
+echo "iOS 13 detected, setting the CFVER to 1600"
 CFVER=1600
 else
 if [[ "${VER%.*.*}" -ge 13 ]]; then
-echo "iOS 13 Dectected Set The CFVER To 1600"
+echo "iOS 13 detected, setting the CFVER to 1600"
 CFVER=1600
 else
 if [[ "${VER%.*.*}" -ge 12 ]]; then
-echo "iOS 12 Dectected Set The CFVER To 1500"
+echo "iOS 12 detected, setting the CFVER to 1500"
 CFVER=1500
 fi
 fi
@@ -51,5 +51,5 @@ echo "URIs: https://apt.procurs.us/" >> /etc/apt/sources.list.d/procursus.source
 echo "Suites: iphoneos-arm64/${CFVER}" >> /etc/apt/sources.list.d/procursus.sources
 echo "Components: main" >> /etc/apt/sources.list.d/procursus.sources
 echo -e "\e[32mMigration Finished!\e[0m"
-echo -e "\e[32mBack To Uncursus Script...\e[0m"
+echo -e "\e[32mBack to Uncursus Script...\e[0m"
 fi